Court's Court

rryland:

do you ever just wanna sit next to someone and listen to everything they could possibly say about anything ever just because you like their face and their voice and their general existence 

(Source: warmachinerox, via kirkbonesspock)

toryarty:

iamhighlyillogical:

fun fact: “HOLY SHIT COURTLYN IS ALIVE” was already taken as a title.

So basically she’s Rory and has died several times but always comes back?

omg tory i love you

(via livinmokotory)

abookisaloadedgun:

I did it! 1715. Take that, word count!

I think I’m going to go ahead and post my work every day when I finish. That way those of you who would like to read it may do so and I’ll have it just right there whenever and yeah.

ONE TIME ONLY DISCLAIMER!

The following is THE FIRST DRAFTIEST FIRST DRAFT TO EVER BE FIRST DRAFTED and as such you are encouraged to discuss and question whatever big things you read and wish to critique (such as characters, style choices, themes, things of that nature), but if you get on me about grammar and typos, I will eat you.

If you read on, I take my hat off to you and you are also probably now my favorite person ever, but I will never love anyone less for not wanting to read nano draft barf. Carry on.

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• I’d agree with the “mundaneness” of the first bit, but it’s fine as long as it isn’t THE opening. Like, fine for chapter opening, just not the book :P But I like it; it feels comfortable and “homey”
• Yeah editing lolno who cares 
• ‘“Oh.” Shane’s mom had been calling her daughter down more and more to consult about decisions. It wasn’t like Greta was crazy for presuming that was the purpose of a last-minute visit. Her desire to have Shane in a good mood won out over her indignation though. “Cool.” ’            Why was she indignant? :P Like, because her opinion was “dissed?” Idk, maybe explain that more or something :P
• D’AW SIBLING THINGS kk i’m done
• I know someone already said this, but I love your dialogue; it always just flows well
• You might want to highlight the deference given Mrs. Northern. Like, I know you wanted her to definitely be the pack leader, but a bit more emphasis on the that would, I think, be helpful here. It kind of just feels like it’s “awkward”  because she’s being “brought home to see the family” as opposed to actually being nervous due to her having a position of power.
• OHHHH CLIFF HANGERISH ENDING NEXT SCENE PLEASE

iamhighlyillogical:

• I am Annie (duh), Dani is Molly, Sara is Pepper
• Punjab is actually Vulcan. LOOK AT HIS EYEBROWS! WHATCHA GOT UNDER YOUR TURBAN, EH PUNJAB? HE CAN CONTROL THINGS WITH HIS MIND AND DROP PEOPLE WITH A TOUCH HE IS TOTALLY VULCAN OKAY.
• Daddy Warbucks is actually an alien and Grace knows this. The point of getting an orphan wasn’t actually to make him seem ~nicer~ but more ~human~.
• Grace tried to date Trellis Guy (he climbs the trellis to give Annie the bouquet of flowers) but he turned out to be gay and so now they’re bros who dance together a lot and have lots of fun and after work they get together for drinks and he listens sympathetically while she 
• Daddy Warbucks’ Asian driver is Kato’s great-grandfather. (ala Green Hornet)
• When Annie is adopted, Punjab teaches her all his tricks
• THIS ISN’T A HEADCANON I JUST FEEL LIKE SAYING THAT ROOSEVELT IS A BAMF SLDKFJSLDJF
• PS INFRASTRUCTURE NERD RAAAAAAAGE because loads of infrastructure from the New Deal programs haven’t been updated. Okay, rant done, back to Annie.
• The night gatekeeper totally sucks and is the guy who was on duty when the bomb got let in. GOSH DUDE YOU SUCK AT YOUR JOB HOW HAVE YOU NOT BEEN FIRED?
• Buddha said, Punjab? More like Surak said.